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:Ranma nibun no ichi - 9 - H is for Hinako                           [Lemon]
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Well well...our Kun-chan's form and style have changed a lot.

That's what happens after about 4 years of writing. ^_~ (What has it been
since the last 'fic? Almost a year?)

Very enjoyable fiction.  I recommend this one for all to read. (All who can
legally read it, that is :)  Nice Gos-hinako subplot..Gos's angst was
especially well-rendered.

Thank you. ^_^

The old trademarks of her lemons:
1.  lots...of...ellipsis(sp?:)...during...the...lemon...scenes.  Gone ^^

I realised that I used them too much. ^_~

2.  The 80-character long SCREEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMMMMM
MIIIIING the sex partner's name.  Gone ^^

Actually, I think that that has been gone from the last two or three
'fics... oh, well.

3.  ALL THAT CONVERSATION during the sex?  Gone ^^

Instead the lemon scenes were almost raw; and very thrusting oriented (as
opposed to conversation/human-interaction oriented).  What I mean is that
once characters reach the "main event", normally a lemon writer devotes
a max of a short paragraph to it.  Kun-chan here goes way beyond that and
stretches things out so that the scene feels almost like it's going to
last forever; which is what the characters are probably feeling as well.
Cool effect.

Thanks. ^_^  But I can't just leave it as a short paragraph... don't know,
but if it's so short, what's the point? It might be more 'realistic' to
have it so short that it seems only like 5m ( ^_^ ) but isn't that a tad
boring? And there's only so much you can write to 'do the deed' in one
little paragraph. Too much repeating as it is, in the lemon in the series,
without short little paragraphs that are almost exactly the same, each
time! ^_^

I think it's an improvement over Kun-chan's ultra-sweet-10-coats-of-sugar
lemons of yesteryear.  Well..Ranma No Hentai was sugar-coated as well,

Heh... thanks, but I think for the next one, it'll be going back to a more
sugar-coated one, though probably a mix of the two. We'll see... depends
how I feel at the time, I guess. ;p

but it was a very exceptional piece despite that.  Hmm...I liked the

Thanks. ^_^  Anyone can find that on my fanfic page. ^_~

old spring roll scene as well, in fact I had to cameo that scene in
one of my own writings. ^^

*grin* (Heh, that spring roll scene was fun to write... that can be found
on my home page, too. Hmm... it's in the Nibun no Ichi series, though I
can't recall which 'fic, exactly...)

Well...sorry about this rambling.  It's just I couldn't help

That's okay! ^_^

but notice the transition in the author's style.

Time, and possibly change in the way I research stuff, has probably caused
that transition!  (Also, I guess, the way I feel at the time does it,
too!)

Heck...Before now, I doubt Seawright would let Ranma be caught
dead saying something as uncultured as "Nnngh!" as he did his duty
by Akane..on a washing machine no less.. O_O .. and he never once
called her Darling or Love ^^

Teehee. ^_^  It was done like that for a reason, though. Just to keep up
on how Ranma and Akane are still going after the years, even though
they've got children and what not. Just to show that there still is a lot
of passion there, and that they're not exactly into the 'old routine'
thing that people tend to slip into. ^_~  (Hey, this isn't real life, you
know!!) The 'darling' and 'love' and all will be back, as will the
conversation, etc. ^_~  (This is just something different! I do tend to
put in 'different' things in the 'fics all the time... mostly to get away
from the same old same old descriptions that tend to get repeated...)

Kun-chan...
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