Hi, I've read some of the comments the other FFMLers have posted about C&C,
and posting half finished works. Well I've got my 5th chapter of ACGS
partly done, and i'd say its about 70% done. I wanted to know if its ok
with you guys if i post it to the list and get a few c&c from u guys too,
besides from what I got from my pre-readers (and a lot of good ones too
^_^) so that I could get suggestions for dialogue or some other things i
could include in it.

right now, dialogue is the problem I'm facing...

What brought this on was the fact that school was coming, and I thought I'd
get this out of the way before it starts or it would bring more delay in
its release. 

the first four chapters have been compiled to one long file (300+ kb) and
slightly is revised

the fifth chapter is about 120 kb - rough draft with two teasers included

And please respond by private mail. Thank you for your time.

Sincerely

~ Kahlil Noriega ~

Author of the fic "Ranma 1/2 A Chinese Ghost Story"

" Frost fills the sky over Ten Mile Lake,
  Silken threads anxious of youth....
  Looking at the moon and feeling lonely...
  Envious of lovers, not of immortality.
  Envious of love, not of immortality. " 

        - Excerpt from the movie " A Chinese Ghost Story "

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