An interesting premise couched in okay prose. The fic isn't laden with 
too much filler, and remains focused and interesting from beginning to 
end.

The idea that the Axis won a world-wide victory is ridiculous beyond 
words, but the alternate world is interesting. It needs to be fleshed 
out more, but mind you don't get distracted.

The possibilities of this fic could have been explored better--a direct 
personality exchange would have been more conductive to what you were 
doing in these chapters, and it would have provided a great vehicle for 
that world description I mentioned earlier. Perhaps you can work that in 
in later chapters. Don't limit yourself to Ranma, get the whole cast 
involved.

You're off to a good start. Don't lose the trail. I would like to see 
this fic continue.



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