Sir, I must commend you on originality and simply splendid writing

for

the most part.  There were one or two words that were spelled CORRECTLY but
were in the wrong context.

I must concur on the commendation!

       I, myself, am an avid fan of ANYTHING science fiction.  I must

say, as

well, that you pulled this off very expertly.

so far, so good.  I must read the original, to gauge the amount of
closeness. there was a fic a while back that was a near word-for-word
duplicate..  I'm not even trying to imply this is (it flows too well to be,
really!) but I thought I should bring it up.

       I, myself, would like to see a bit more about the "Intelligent"
Ranma's parents... as you pointed out Genma was a Scholar, what would Nodoka
be? Just a typical housewife??

again, I concur. my interest, however, lies in the IMPERFECTIONS, of our
Ranmas..  if you combine Ranmas, not only are they going to gain each
others strengths, but some of the weaknesses..  Brain-Ranma may start
losing his scholary acuity, while Ranma-prime begins to have less and less
interest in martial arts.. 

hmm. 

       I am eager to see, if you continue this story, where it might
lead..... so, until then, Domo Arigatou for a good read.

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of Shimitsu-Ryuu.
Prince of Chaos.
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you, But acceptance can conquer that fear you hold high, through acceptance
comes peace..... are you willing to try?"
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