Once upon a time TimeRunner shaped the electrons to say...
The Sum of All Parts : Black
Neon Chronicle Evangelion
Ok, I liked it - it's amusing and entertaining. An Eva soap opera or
sitcom is the feeling I get from it. I expect Eva purists to loathe it,
congrats. ;-)
A few things - you must be using some special character set. All of your
apostrophes were unrecognized characters. So isn't became isn?t, etc.
Stick to standard ASCII for reability. There were a few spots that felt
rough, language-wise, but it is readable.
Just beware the mega-epic, for it can become all consuming. Take it from
someone who's been involved in one for 7 years running... ;-)
-MZ