The clouds parted....

A ray of sunlight struck the earth...

The heavens sang...

And I started looking for the other signs of the Apocalypse.

Ladies and gents, call the newspapers, BILES ACTUALLY WROTE MORE FURINKEN
SUMMER!

<pant, pant>

Now, for C&C...I'm tired, it's 12:30, and I don't want to REALLY go into it,
so I'm going ot be short:

I liked it.  It was fun, and got me to laugh.  You kept the general feel of
the story, and the plot moved along in a believable (for this story) way.
However, I think you need to tone down the silliness just a smidge.  As the
work went on you got more and more..."lateral thinking theatre" and it
started to just get a little tiresome.

G'nite all.

--
Christopher 'God-Boy' Angel
c_j_angel@hotmail.com
http://www.geocities.com/~ca_godboy

Top 10 'God-Boy' Titles:
10) God of Moments,
9) Lord of Paradox,
8) Deity of Never,
7) Protector of the Norns,
6) The Silver Saber (GT 1),
5) The Warrior of Noise (GT 2?),
4) The Magic Knight of Earth (GT3?),
3) The Ancient One (GT 4?),
2) That Maniac in Skull Six (GT 5?),
1) International Man of Megami-sama.