Redneck Gaijin wrote:

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    Hmm..... well, I do suppose I am a wanton sucker for Punishment, so I would but
inquire of you <To see your skills> to review my 1st episode of my series, just to
see how well you do in the analysis.
    *!<Warning>!*
    Every single section in my story either alludes, foreshadows, or hints at events
in the history, the present events, or even things that have yet to be.  Take this
into note before critisizing the relevance of said paragraphs.
    Also, some of the words are capitalized for a relevant reason.. such as the word
"Love".  I capitalize this to emphasize the word, without making it complete caps.
    *!<End Warning>!*
    *Nods* All three of the first episodes can be found at my web-site, who's URL is
attached to my sig. file.
    I await your response and critique..... *Nod Nod*.

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Sincerely....
Shimitsu Kaoru.
Lost "Dragon-Boy"
of Shimitsu-Ryuu.
Prince of Chaos.
"What makes a curse is simply the view, a blessing to some is a curse unto you, But
acceptance can conquer that fear you hold high, through acceptance comes peace.....
are you willing to try?"
   -Quote from Kaoru Shimitsu.
My Homepage at!
http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Garden/4534