In previous parts of the fanfic ("Sibling Rivalry" by Liz Donovan), 

Ranma

caught Akane having sex with Ryouga in her bedroom. He was really
saddened/hurt/enraged by this, which lead to him later dumping Akane 

and

his current attitude towards her. Looking back though, I'm not 

completely

sure if that would explain all the excessive swearing from Ranma in 

this

paragraph though (and he hasn't swore this badly before). I suppose
perhaps I should tone down the swear words a bit? Then again, there's a
first time to everything, and he's never caught Akane making love to
Ryouga before... argg, characterization experts, help? :)

To my, admittedly limited, knowledge of the non-dubbed anime, Ranma and 
Ryoga both swear ALOT more then they are given credit for in most 
fanfiction.  I usually try to keep swearing to a minimum in my fics.  I 
just can't get comfortable writing a sailor streak into a fic.

So I'm squeamish... so sue me.

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     -A Wise Elbonian

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