Subject: Re: [FFML] [Ranma][Lemon] The New Engagement
From: "Philip C. Mak" <pmak@cs.dal.ca>
Date: 8/19/1998, 1:37 PM
To: ffml@fanfic.com

In previous parts of the fanfic ("Sibling Rivalry" by Liz Donovan), Ranma
caught Akane having sex with Ryouga in her bedroom. He was really
saddened/hurt/enraged by this, which lead to him later dumping Akane and
his current attitude towards her. Looking back though, I'm not completely
sure if that would explain all the excessive swearing from Ranma in this
paragraph though (and he hasn't swore this badly before). I suppose
perhaps I should tone down the swear words a bit? Then again, there's a
first time to everything, and he's never caught Akane making love to
Ryouga before... argg, characterization experts, help? :)

-Philip Mak (pmak@cs.dal.ca)
http://is2.dal.ca/~pmak/ukyou.html

On Wed, 19 Aug 1998, Gary Kleppe wrote:


Who is this person, and what has he done with the real Ranma?

"Philip C. Mak" <pmak@cs.dal.ca> wrote:

   Ranma, still smiling, just looked at him. Then he finally
said, "Ryoga, that slutty bitch of yours Akane is waiting for you
at the Tendo's. Don't keep her bitch ass waiting. Oh and one more
thing. Tell her not to wait up for me, but if you're there,
she'll probably be up half the night anyway."

Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics