Monkey Head Butting part seven will probably be finished tonight, but it's
one of the most complicated sections of the entire story.  Normally I trust
my own judgment on these things, having been writing for a few years now...
but I think at this point I could use a few people to go through looking for
logic flaws, wayward pronouns, and in general to tell me if I've
accomplished what I intend to accomplish.  ("Great job!  You wanted to waste
electrons and fill people's mailboxes with drivel, didn't you?  I could
tell.  Oh, wait, you didn't?  Well, in THAT case...")

Oh, and I also need someone to feed me that killer line that will make or
break the fic... ^_^  Well, maybe not... but if two or three people could
look it over within the next day or so and get back to me, I'd appreciate
it!

Miko!

"When I use a word," Humpty Dumpty said, in a rather a scornful tone, "it
means just what I choose it to mean -- neither more nor less."
"The question is," said Alice, "whether you can make words mean so many
different things."
"The question is," said Humpty Dumpty, "which is to be master -- that's
all."

(Lewis Carroll, Through The Looking-Glass)

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