Pretty good stuff sir!  The only problem that i feel that exists is
the flow of the conversations [maybe it is just me, i dunno].  To me,
I am sometimes wondering who is talking to who.  But other than that,
it is an excellent work, IMHO.   




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A Hint of Things to Come.....
"Say What about Kagato???"
"The True Kagato is alive and planning to take over this universe!"
But then, the doors to the Juraian throne room are bashed in, and the smoke clears, revealing our heroes:  Tenchi Masaki, Linna Inverse, Leto [7th of the Name], Princess Ayeka, Ryoko, and the 2 Jurian Knights.
Tenchi roars, "Not if WE have a say in it!!!"
Thor Odinson

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