Author's notes:

Please Comment! I'm not sure if I should continue with the Ukyou part, 

I

may bring in another character from another series. Any suggestions?

-Belphera

Well to comment on your fic, I say I really liked it. I could never get 
enough of Evangelion and Ranma. Though I've only seen one tape of Eva! 

Anyway, I don't know about you guys / gals. But I felt that the last 
scene with Ukyou could be dropped. It just didn't feel right to me that 
you brought Asuka to the Ranma Universe only to have Ukyou become an 
active rival again.

Ukyou has already suffered one loss with Ranma in this fic, it just 
doesn't feel right for me to have her cope with another ( Even if she 
did have some of her memories removed ) or if ever they do get together. 
What was the point of having Asuka? ( To save the future of mankind I 
guess, with Ranma's help...I think. )

Overall, I like the fic. I won't even bother with spell checks or 
others. God knows I have made plenty of those myself ^_^ 

Waiting for the next chapter.

Sincerely
Kahlil Noriega

Author of the fic "Ranma 1/2 A Chinese Ghost Story"

" Frost fills the sky over Ten Mile Lake,
  Silken threads anxious of youth....
  Looking at the moon and feeling lonely...
  Envious of lovers, not of immortality.
  Envious of love, not of immortality. " 

        - Excerpt from the movie " A Chinese Ghost Story "

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