Subject: Re: [FFML] [Reviews-list] Reviews List for July 31, 1998
From: "D.B.Sommer" <sommer@nb.net>
Date: 8/10/1998, 10:48 PM
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Our kind hearted reviewers said:

Title: Shampoo 1/2 Chapter 32: The Insufferable Lightness of Mother

Summary:

{Paul}
   Can we say "subplots"? 

D.B.: Subplots.

Can we say "Lots of subplots"? 

D.B.: Lots of subplots. This is easy!

Can we say    "seamless integration of subplot and main plot"? 

D.B.: Oh. A tough one. Seamless integration of subplot and main plot. Got
it. ^_^

Can we say
   "cinematic description, plot twists, and engaging writing"?

D.B.: Cinematic description, plot twists, and engrogred wrteng. Aww! I lost
it.


   Can we say "19 or 20 out of 20"? 

D.B.: 19 or 20 out of 20. 

Goooood...

D.B.: I got 4 out of 5, that ain't bad. And thanks a lot for the favorable
review. I really appreciate it and am glad you enjoyed the story. And
thanks a lot to all of you for putting in the time and effort for doing the
Review List. 


D.B. Sommer