SlayerNext@aol.com wrote:

In a message dated 8/9/98 2:33:45 AM Eastern Daylight Time, ShortYes writes:

      <Slap>  "You are perhaps one of the worse excuse for a martial
 artist I have ever heard of.  You and Kuno are alike in many ways.  You
both
 wish only to believe in a delusion rather than reality.  It wasn't Ranma's
 fault that you got your curse and it wasn't his fault that Akane likes him.
 You call yourself honorable yet you sleep with my sister.  You've seen her
 naked and she has told you her deepest thoughts and secrets and still you
 blame everything on Ranma.  Ranma this, Ranma that.  Ranma prepare to die,
 right?  Had it been anyone else, they would have left after the first hour
or
 so.  He waited for three days for you.  The fight was BEHIND your house.
How
 hard can that be?  Ten meters! All you had to do was take twenty

steps!!!!!!

 Who told you to follow him?  'He made you life Hell right?'  You followed
him.
 It was your own choice!  I think your curse suits you.  You are swine.
Ranma
 is honorable.  Kuno is honorable.  Heck, Genma is more honorable than you.
 Get out and stay out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Uh-oh!  Kasumi ran out of Prozac again!

^_^  My exact thoughts.  Let me guess, was this a submission for the CoR
	Fanfic Competition?  Somehow, I feel that it isn't.

Nice short, but is it part of a larger fic?

I agree with SlayerNext.  Though it is a good scene, it should be fit 
into a longer piece.  Otherwise, it suffers because a) It just kinda
floats there by it self, and b) its a scene that's been done to death.
If you leave it, it just kinda drifts away becoming ten lines in the
FFML archive.

-skeezy5