Y'know, Meg, this fic was so awfully horridly bad that most of the
time even a MSTing couldn't make it funny. >_<

I give you credit for actually being able to read all of it
without having comments interspaced.

	"Yeah, I'd be in real trouble if you ever used them!"  Tom roared back.	

^_^

The whole intro thus far has me rolling helpless on the ground
from laughter already ... Zorro - Starwars - Monkey Island; what's
coming next?

	Suddenly Gypsy's voice crackled over the intercom.  "Joel, The
Two Guys from Andromeda are calling...."

Am I imagining or is this a Space Quest reference?

	Dr. Forrester snorted.  "Well, of course there's side-effects, Joel!  
For one thing, anyone using this thing will never have to talk to another 
live human being ever again, meaning they'll never leave the house and
second, the VBH may prevent the user from getting too drunk...."

... and of course, if you're trying to pick up MOSes, you'll have to
guess whether they actually *are* good-looking or not. ^_^

THIS CRAZY ENTERTAINMENT STORY IS BY A RUMIKO 
TAKAHASHI  

Gotta give it to'im, at least he could spell her name.

Akane Tendo, the youngest of the Tendo siblings was inside the dojo 
practicing some of her karate martial arts techniques. 

Watch out for the karate techniques that are *not* martial arts. ^_^

Joel: In fanfiction, anything is possible.
Tom: Which in most cases is a good thing....

Though in this case, I'd say it isn't. ^_^

...

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Ronny Hedin, thark@hem2.passagen.se, http://nabiki.newberry.edu/thark/
        "So, they aren't extraterrestials?"
        "Nope, they're manga characters who've lost their hair."
        (the unexpected end of X-files)