Sorry for making everyone wait, but at long
last here is chapter 2 of "Ranma1/2: Reversal of Fortune." Enjoy!!!
If there was ever a series that will never be finished (or have more of
a contrived, abrupt ending), this one will top it. I'm sorry, but what
are you trying to put across with this? What aspect of the Akane-Ranma
relationship are you trying to explore?
It seems to me that you're trying to follow the manga, but with the
gender twist and then having fun with the characters--but where's the
fun? We are treated with lots of well-written but bland dialogue.
Nothing interesting has yet to happen.
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