Subject: Re: [FFML] [Fic][Ranma] Reversal of Fortune, chapter 2
From: "Guy Under The Bridge ." <the_supergenius@hotmail.com>
Date: 8/5/1998, 12:59 AM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

  Sorry for making everyone wait, but at long 
last here is chapter 2 of "Ranma1/2: Reversal of Fortune."  Enjoy!!!

If there was ever a series that will never be finished (or have more of 
a contrived, abrupt ending), this one will top it. I'm sorry, but what 
are you trying to put across with this? What aspect of the Akane-Ranma 
relationship are you trying to explore?

It seems to me that you're trying to follow the manga, but with the 
gender twist and then having fun with the characters--but where's the 
fun? We are treated with lots of well-written but bland dialogue. 
Nothing interesting has yet to happen.





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