Oops, I did leave a not out of that line. it should have
read and akane as a martial artist but NOT as filled with
anger.

No, that is strictly a fanfic concept, as far as I know
there is no mention of what Nabiki does with her money. You
could assume she is supporting Ryoga in an apartment as her
love slave or running an orphanage. I was quoting a friend
here and that was his description of the plots.
I agree about story ideas, original isn't important, nice
but not essential, good writing is important.
Which is the idea behind the FFML to give us a place to
submit stories and ideas and get comments and criticism
back. So we can improve our writing skills. For which we
should all thank White Wolf and the others who run it for
us, and Tybalt who cleans out the spam for us.
In Unison: "THANK YOU!"

--
Rick Robinson
RICHARDROBINSONJR@prodigy.net


When in danger or in doubt, run in circles,
                    scream and shout.

Always listen to experts. They'll tell you
                    what can't be done, and why. Then do it.

                    Lazarus Long in Time Enough for Love