Was it just me or did anyone else get the feeling this was
edited from a chapter about twice this size and some of the
sections removed (or left) at random?
I agree with David Eddy, this shows that he is tired of this
story. I have had that feeling for about two chapters now.
This one fells like it was edited after two all nighters in
a row. There a lot of lines and even whole paragraphs that
don't make any sense, things or events happen without any
real need; E.G. the fight with Happi and his wearing a Bra
scene, or the scene with his mom. Either might have had a
purpose in earlier versions but I didn't see any advancement
of the story in either in this version.I want  to qualify
that I can see the fight scene to help Ranma realize he can
now access the Cat-Fist  consciously but I didn't get the
purpose of Happi putting the bra on him.

--
Rick Robinson
RICHARDROBINSONJR@prodigy.net


When in danger or in doubt, run in circles,
                    scream and shout.

Always listen to experts. They'll tell you
                    what can't be done, and why. Then do it.

                    Lazarus Long in Time Enough for Love