Hey there, Gureggu-kun!

In a message dated 98-08-01 11:22:16 EDT, you write:

And before all the Akane-otaku start their flamethrowers, imagine 

Wouldn't dream of it, sugar...

what would happen if the village Enforcer, about to kill the thief, 
is knocked out by him instead? 
 Can i insert an evil laugh here?

Douzo.  I would otherwise  <grin>.

 Oh, am also thinking of changing the title, as i'm told "Enslaved" 
 sounds like it should be a lemon.

Hmm... hadn't thought about it, but there's enough hentais out 
there to which that would make sense.  However...

 How about "Wayward Son"?

No.  If that refers to Ran-chan, he's right in defying his father.
So I wouldn't call his actions 'wayward.'  Even less so in the
fact that he goes to his mother w/Kasumi and Nabiki.  Maybe
some reference to freeing slaves... 'Underground Railroad'
or some such.  Maybe 'Free at Last, Free at Last...' (on second
thought, reserve that for your final chapter).

Just my two yen worth... in any case, I'm hungry for more.

Itsu mo,
Ucchan   ^_^