I realize now what it is about this fanfic that has been driving
me nuts.  When you're reading a book, you know how many
pages are left until the end.  When you're watching a movie,
you know it's going to be a certain length.  With a story like
this one, though, you have no idea of how long the author is
going to continue to write.  There could be one more chapter,
there could be twenty.  Meanwhile, the tale grabs you and 
sweeps you along, and you can't wait to read the next part.

Keep up the excellent work.  And don't tell me how many 
chapters are left.  The suspense is exquisite.

Grayson Towler
grayson@rigroup.net

http://www.rigroup.com/~grayson/relentless