Subject: Re: [FFML] [Ranma][fanfic][Revised] Hearts and Minds Prelude 3 - Kuno Kodachi: The Contest
From: Edward Becerra
Date: 7/31/1998, 4:41 PM
To: David Homerick <dhomeric@jps.net>, Gary Kleppe <KLEPPE@execpc.com>, ffml@fanfic.com

At 10:54 PM 7/30/98 -0700, David Homerick wrote:

Another possibility is to change the dish to something that isn't supposed
to be sweet.  Sweet-and-sour pork, perhaps.  That way Kodachi can genuinely
make the dish nasty, but Hinako sensei-chan would still like it, being the
sort of person who spoons sugar over caviar.

"This beer needs more sugar!  And a marshmallow!"
-- David

	You know, Gary, this is an almost PERFECT way out of that little plot
hole. ANY sweet & sour dish would do, and the addition of sugar would ruin
it for everyone else BUT Hinako, thereby shocking not only Kodachi, but the
entire audience.

	And it wouldn't take much of a rewrite, either.

	Ed.


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