warr@pobox.alaska.net (Warr) wrote:

I didn't see anything that really needed fixing, so I just threw in a couple
comments as they came to me.  :)

OK, sounds good! :)

Either Kuno learned nothing in his 5 years with the Amazons, or Kodachi
has improved even more than he has in the missing years... Sure, it's
dark and she can be silent...that's not the point.  <G>

Kodachi has her own little secret that'll be revealed later...
ohoHOHOHOHO!

Akane sat in her seat, not hearing much of what
her teacher was saying -- something about conjugal verbs.

^^^^^^^^
Akane's thinking about the match or the near marriage? Or
is this another pun.

Hinako was talking about verb conjugation, and Akane didn't hear
correctly. (Pun? Moi? ^_^)

Should there be a line between the two paragraphs?

Must be a formatting error. Will fix.

Nice addition to the series.  I'm wondering what Kodachi has been up to
in the missing years, however.  Ranma and Akane are getting closer and

True, they are, though they still have conflicts, and to some degree
always will. (Hey, I think they're more interesting that way.)

Ranma's mom is relaxing a bit.  Nice to see a little of that after seeing
stories like Return of the Sisters and Rejection.  <Both of which are
excellent stories.>

The author of the former was delighted for the free plug, BTW. :)

Eagerly awaiting HaM part 4!

It'll be up next Monday. I appreciate the commentary!



Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics