As Kasumi would say:  Oh my!  

As to Gos, you may want to add a scene or two, having him show up and add a
line or two.

(Personally I do think that Nabiki would know him, just on reputation alone.
How many Furinkan students do you know who have shown up with candles straped
to their heads?)

Otherwise, thhis was a very well-told fanfic.  Had me going there.

James Holzhauer (aka Tobimaro [Ton-chan])
      ---maybe Nabiki could get Akane to a cooking class.  But the medical
bills may be a bit too high, though.  *shrug*
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      Lum nut, anime fan, and fanfiction reader                               
      "All we need to do...is make sure...we keep...talking."
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