Jason Liao <jasonl@hun.k12.nj.us> wrote:

On Mon, 20 Jul 1998, Gary Kleppe wrote:

	The
diners had been served,

 ^^^^^^
Diners, or dinners?  At first glance, I'd thought that it would be the
second, but looking back at the sentance, I realized that the first might
make sense as well.

It's diners.

	"Indeed it is, and it gives me great pleasure to meet an old
friend."

Did he ever meet Ukyou?  I'll admit that my firsthand Ranma knowledge is
not very broad.

Never shown explicitly that I know of... but they went to the same
school, so it seems reasonable that they might've met. Whether Kuno knew
Ukyo's true gender is another question....

				 ______
				^^^^^^^^ 

	Tatewaki pulled up a chair, as his host had suggested.

Why the page break here?

Marks the transition between Ukyo's point of view and Tatewaki's.

	Ranma took Akane by the hand, leading her out the door.

<snip>

	Akane intercepted Ukyo's arm. "That's enough!"

Akane's got a long arm, there.

Oh. Top line there should say TOWARD the door.

Of course, this raises the obvious question:  Cutting out Ukyou would save
them money, so if it's legal, why didn't they do this in the first place? 

(1) The legality is questionable, (2) they would rather have a real-life
spokesperson than just a character, and (3) they'd have preferred to
avoid angering someone who carries a huge combat spatula. :)

*sniff*  That...that was so poignant!  WAAAHHH!!!  ^_^

Seriously, though.  This was pretty nice.

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.

And thanks for the FFIRC note yesterday.  Fun, even if I had to leave in
the middle of the review.

Glad you could make it! We meet every sunday, and we often hang around
in the channel evenings just to chat. Stop by anytime! (Goes for all the
rest of you out there too.)


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics