Okay...  I've written something...  I'm not so proud of it, but I'd
like to salvage the idea.  I'm not ready to post it, so I'd like some
people who could pre-read it and give me some HEAVY criticism.  It 
needs some extensive work done on it, and I'd like as in depth opinion
as can be provided...  Please tell me if you're interested...

-skeezy5