I posted a fic chapter yesterday morning, and so far I've gotten a grand
total of *one* response on it -- and this was from one of the
prereaders.

Could I PLEASE get some more feedback on this from someone? I know it's
a revision, but it's been changed fairly extensively, and I really need
to know how well it works before it gets sent off to RAAC. Even an "It
sucked" or an "It was OK" would be very much appreciated.

Thanks.



Gary Kleppe <kleppe@execpc.com>
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics.html