Nicely written chapter. A bit predictable to those of us who already
know what the chi-thingy does... but there's probably not much you can
do about that. What is missing, though, is an examination about how
Ranko feels about the whole thing. Is she happy about being able to live
a full life now? Guilty because she precludes Ranma from existing while
she does? Afraid that his friends will blame her? All of the above,
maybe? We need to know.

Next time, a new character as we've never seen him before?!? If it's a
new character, we've *never* seen him before. :-P


Gary Kleppe <kleppe@execpc.com>
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics.html