Mein Gott!! Hatta and Komatsu! I can practically see them
drooling at onna-Ranma when she takes of her shirt to
wring out the water. And with onna-Ranma's lack of feminine
modesty the Hentai Twins will on her in a flash with the
totally predictable results.^_^ Much excruciating pain
in the future for those two.

All this also presupposes that Ranma and the Hentai Twins
get an opportunity to meet, get transoformed into a girl
would not be much a problem with the way Ranma attracts
water.

Otherwise, the fic looks to be coming along quite nicely
I look forward to more.

--
Patrick Vera
kasuga@mnl.sequel.net
iiradned@hotmail.com
ranma@my-dejanews.com
Dendarii Free Mercenary Fleet
Daring rescues our specialty.