David Johnston Wrote:

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This was quite good - though cat-Ranma being even this articulate stretches 
my credibility.  I suppose, though, that this was a necessary device, and that 
being so, I found this a convincing and frightening depiction of Ranma as 
animalia.   He doesn't seem, though, to be as much an animal as a 
heartbreakingly innocent child, or a retarded man -- it kind of reminds me of 
"Flowers for Algernon."  And of course, you deserve kudos for doing this under 
the one-syllable restriction (as far as I noticed, anyway.)







Thomas Schmidt
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