"Freemage ." <freemage@hotmail.com> wrote:

Well, I'd really like some feedback on this one, folks, cause I am not 
totally happy with it--mainly the fight at the school.  Everything seems 
OK until Akane confronts them, but then it felt a little forced to me.  

Maybe it would help to show Akane's feelings after the incident -- how it
changes her view of Ranma, etc.

I'd also like commentary on the nightmare sequence, especially if anyone 
found it to be too much.

Seemed fine to me.

The mysterious building is Tofu's clinic, isn't it? If it is, Ranma is being
pretty thick not to realize it.


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics