Ok, I finally got it done..its short, but its a bit more interesting 

than the

last chapter. Im not sure when chapter 3 will be out, since Im working 

on

another fic. I decided to expand on my tagfic..its about 5 KB right 

now. I'd

like some C&C on this, since I really havent been getting any. Please, 

please,

please send C&C. 

This looks really good.  However, you have one major gaffe and a couple 
of minor quibbles:

	"Well, Ranma, this is at least seven people that are in love with 

you...and

that's just people I can think of off the top of my head," Akane 

grumbled.

	"Yeah, but the first girl in love with my girl side..unless you could
Tsubasa. And he doesn't really count." Ranma replied.

Actually, the very first one to fall in love with Ranma fell in love 
with his girl side:  Tatewaki Kunou!

	"This is all very interesting and all, but I'm a bit tired, and I'd 

like to

find a place to sleep." Kimiko interrupted, standing up.

Quote punctuation:   '... to sleep," Kimiko interupted,'

I have a guide to punctuating quotes, if you're interested.

	Ranma scowled. Akane smiled. "Great, you can sleep in the living room, 

if you

don't mind. This is so great..brother and sister untied after all these

They were tied for this long?  Wow... Kinky.  ~_* (I assume you meant 
"united".)

years." 

-=End Chapter 2=-

Anyone else notice that Tybalt has posted more times this week than in 

the

past month? Makes ya think, dont it? ::grins and waves to Tybalt::

Well, he's been... motivated.

--Freemage, who actually lost a few messages this week when his mailbox 
overloaded with ML spam....

~Nabiki~


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"Hey Kuno-chan, I've got some new pictures of your Pigtailed Girl.."
"Ah, Nabiki Tendo, what be the cost of these pieces of paper that which 

convey

the beauty of my goddess?"
"500 each."
".....Oh forget it! Nabiki Tendo, I would date with *you*!!"
Kuno grabs Nabiki and kisses her passionately.
Nabiki grins, slightly dazed. "Hey, Kuno-chan..I've got pictures of
myself..only 600 yen."
"I need no pictures, for the beauty that which is my fair Nabiki can 

not be

portrayed by mere photographs!"
"You're so right, Kuno-chan! I love you, so much!"
"Ah, and I love you as well, my flower."
The two kiss and skip off happily into the sunset.
~*~
Nabiki woke up in a cold sweat. "Oh kami..thats the last time I eat 

Akane's

cooking before bed....."
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