| Subject: Re: [FFML] [Ranma][X-files][First there was Darkness] |
| From: Shadow6865@aol.com |
| Date: 7/7/1998, 3:47 PM |
| To: pmak@cs.dal.ca, Damamamon@aol.com |
| CC: ffml@fanfic.com |
In a message dated 98-07-07 09:28:52 EDT, pmak@cs.dal.ca writes: << Your first part seems very interesting, although I must point out that you should fill in the plot more; i.e. explain why Soun died, show how Ranma was involved (be sure to justify Akane and Nabiki hating him >> I like that fact the is not revealed. It could be Ranma's equivlent for Moulder's secrets about his father and sister and what really happened to them.