Subject: Re: [FFML][extreme beta] [TM] Ryo-o-ki's big day
From: David Lerman
Date: 7/6/1998, 3:22 AM
To: MadamHydra@aol.com, ffml@fanfic.com

At 03:26 AM 7/6/98 EDT, MadamHydra@aol.com wrote:


Definitely WAFFy, but enjoyable all the same.  But now I better go listen to
my Metallica CDs before I go into a sugar coma from all this cuteness...
(gasp).   ^_^; 

 Of course it's WAFFY, Ryo-ohki is always warm and fuzzy when not in
spaceship form.  But I do agree with Madam Hydra that the fic is a bit too
cutesy.  Stress the humor and tone down the cuteness.   

                                                     dml