I wonder if this is just me.  Are we not supposed to realize that this is
based on a Ray Bradbury story of the same(!) title?  You know, at least a
small nod in that direction might have been in order.  And then there's The
Shape of Things To Come... the source, I'm pretty sure, of the names Faber
and Montag.  I'd suggest just a tad more originality in future efforts.

Your's in avoidance of plagerism at all costs,

Bob Barnes
rbarnes@moscow.com
Moscow, Idaho

When opportunity comes, the trick is to CATCH the red hat.