Interesting idea, and Ataru is more or less in character. (Only
"several" girls? Why not every beautiful woman on the planet?) But
unless Cologne knows something that she's not telling, she's being
incredibly stupid in this story. Why not just use the thing herself to
get rid of Ataru?

BTW, Ronny, I'll preread your stories if they're based on series I'm
interested in. You know which ones those are.


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics