A commendable reworking of events, Rei-Chan.  Ultimately, I am impressed by 
your ability to work in an accuracy without relying heavily on technical boon-
doggle to move the story.  Eliminating the angels and focusing on an 
historical event is truly a first in Eva fics that I've read.

-The Reverend Prez



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