MetroAnime@aol.com wrote:

	Nadoka grabbed her husband and Mister Tendo and
yelled "Ranma, get your butt in gear, we are outta 
here." Usually she was the calm in the eye of the storm,
but this had already been a pretty bad day.

O-kay... let's see here...

Yesterday you sent this chapter to me for pre-reading -- without even
asking me first, I might add. I spent time I could've used on my own
writing going through it. I didn't get a reply, and now it doesn't look
like you've changed a thing. You haven't even corrected the spelling of
Nodoka's name, or changed the ridiculously un-Nodoka-ish line quoted
above.

Don't expect C&C from me on any of your stuff for quite a while, Gregg.


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics