At 08:31 PM 6/27/98 EDT, NiChan16@aol.com wrote:

a sequel...one day. Send C&C to the adress at the top of the page. Flames

will

be deleted. In other words...if you don't like it don't tell me.

Obviously, you have posted this to the wrong mail list.  C&C includes being
told that the reader did not like the story and the reasons for the dislike.  

As far as this story (including chapters 2 and 3), I see insufficient
explanation of why Ranma would agree to become a vampire.  Ranma is
expected to take over and run the dojo which is a matter of family honor.
He is also expected to have children to carry on the school.  As a vampire,
he can do neither (although, if he moves the school to Las Vegas he might
be able to run an all night dojo).  Also, I don't see Ranma agreeing to a
lifestyle that involves killing people to survive.  

                                                                    dml