Ucchan/Kiyone the Omnipotent wrote:
There was one point in the fic when, instead of Kuno, the authour put
"Steve." Either he copied a movie novelization and changed the names, or
he
was so infatuated with the movie that he, in a mad frenzy, put the wrong
name. I think this is a really bad fic, because the author used no
creativity.
I will admit that it was not the most creative thing I have ever read,
still for some reason I got a kick out of it. This was a crossover that I
did not see coming, I enjoyed, but could have enjoyed more. Changing the
events that occurred into something more funny would have been more
original, easy on the mind and more like Ranma. A better move in many
aspects. Needs some work, but it is the authors decision the way that
he/she wants a story to go.
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--And remember, if you are going down, take
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