At 17:05 6/26/98 -0700, you wrote:

To quote a phrase: "I sense a trend here."

Mark, you're a good writer from a technical standpoint.  You've got a lot of
skill at crafting prose.  But if you hate the series this much...

STOP F***ING WRITING IN IT!

This was not a labour of love, like every other fanfiction I've read.  This
was not exploring a dimension in the series, or a new story, or anything.

This was: "I felt like killing of the Senshi in a gruesome and horrible way.
Let's share it with everyone."

This felt like a labour of hate from begining to end.

  I guess this explains why Marco de la Cruz posts his stuff anonymously...

 -Andrew (who likes it anyway, even if it is sick, twisted, and bizarre)

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Andrew Schoonmaker (neon@eskimo.com)
On the other hand, you have different fingers.