Ace Sanchez wrote:

     "Don't ever say my mother's name again. It's not worthy to come out
of
your maggot infested lips," she said quietly, but said in such a way to
convey even more danger than if it had been shouted.

"I am Ryanko Saotome. I thought it would be polite if you knew your
killer's name before you went and died. Painfully."

She let out an evil grin, showing sharp fangs. "Bye bye, father."

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    All I able say to you is, WHERE IS CHAPTER 2?!!!! I need to read chapter
2! It is very well written and thought out story you write here, even in
first draft. ;p   I love to find out what happen to Ryouga in this fight and
what history Ryanko have between when Ryouga rape Ran-chan and now. I await
a good seriously delicious story from you.  For good read, ARIGATO !!!  :-)

Nakajima, Aya  ^__^