First, there was Usagi is Dead 1.
Then, there was SIU.
Then, there was Usagi is Dead 2.
Then, this.

I've probably missed a couple things in there, but I don't care.

To quote a phrase: "I sense a trend here."

Mark, you're a good writer from a technical standpoint.  You've got a lot of
skill at crafting prose.  But if you hate the series this much...

STOP F***ING WRITING IN IT!

This was not a labour of love, like every other fanfiction I've read.  This
was not exploring a dimension in the series, or a new story, or anything.

This was: "I felt like killing of the Senshi in a gruesome and horrible way.
Let's share it with everyone."

This felt like a labour of hate from begining to end.

Please, Mark, I beg you.  If you hate Sailor Moon, just don't write in it.

--
Christopher 'God-Boy' Angel
c_j_angel@hotmail.com
http://www.geocities.com/~ca_godboy

CURRENT PROJECT: Age of Eva 4, Mirai Muyo! 3