Well-written and suspenseful as always. One typo:

Mike Loader <mike@thekeep.org> wrote:

	And he wouldn't let that happened to his half-sister, she 
saw. Not when he could simply kill Ranma, who's fault he 
percieved it as being. "How can the law's obligation end, Tsen? 

Should be whose.

Overall, much enjoyed. Kindly don't take so bloody long with the next
part. :-)


Gary Kleppe
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