Very, very good.  I haven't read a fanfic that goes into the 
emotional consequences of Tenchi killing someone for the
first time.  The issue is sort of glossed over, because of
how evil Kagato was, and yet, such an act should have had 
some kind of a profound affect on Tenchi, who has always just wanted
to be a simply, ordinary, high school student.  

Excellent piece of work.  

-Anand
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