Subject: [FFML] [SONGFIC] [RANMA] We Belong
From: Bob Schroeck
Date: 6/23/1998, 5:48 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com (Fanfic Mailing List)

Open on long crane shot:  Tendo home and dojo.  Audio:  
environmental noises -- birds chirping, a jet passing overhead, 
bicycle bell, wind, traffic.  No human voices.  Dolly down to 
front of building, then around to garden and koi pond.  We see 
the shattered remains of the failed wedding of issue 38.  The 
Tendo and Saotome families, for the most part, are still in shock 
and dealing with it each in their own way:  Nodoka huddles with 
Genma, Soun sobs in the dining room, Nabiki is counting gift 
money, Kasumi is beginning to clean up, and Ranma and Akane are 
arguing.  

We can't hear what they're saying; all we hear are the 
environmental noises.  But it is a fast and furious argument, 
interspersed with quick reaction shots of the other family 
members, who are becoming increasingly agitated.  The argument 
grows in vehemence, to the point where it begins to crack even 
Kasumi's calm facade.

The argument ends as an expression of rage, betrayal and fear 
flashes onto Akane's face and she slaps Ranma; the crack of flesh 
against flesh is the only sound from the argument that we hear, 
and it echoes like a gunshot.  

Closeup on Ranma as he struggles with his own feelings of anger 
and betrayal.  He spins on his heel and stalks to the far end of 
the yard, beyond the koi pond.

Closeup on Akane as her face runs a gamut of emotions; then she 
turns and flees into the house.

Closeup:  Alarm clock.  It reads 8 PM.  Pull back to reveal it is 
on the nightstand in Akane's room.  Akane is seated crosslegged 
in the middle of her bed.  She is crying.  Outside her window, it 
is dark.

Music up.

               AKANE   
   Many times I've tried to tell you
   Many times I've cried alone
   Always I'm surprised how well you
   Cut my feelings to the bone

She gets up and steps to the window.  Looking down, she sees 
Ranma lit in stark relief by the light from the house. He is 
sitting in zazen on the boulder by the koi pond, brooding.

               AKANE 
   Don't want to leave you really
   I've invested too much time
   To give you up that easy
   To the doubts that complicate your mind

Kuno bursts into Akane's room and tries to embrace Akane; he is 
reciting something to her, but as before, we cannot hear what is 
being said.

               AKANE 
   We Belong to the light
   We Belong to the thunder

Akane absently swats Kuno out her window, then leans back against 
the wall to its side.  She closes her eyes and hugs herself.

               AKANE 
   We Belong to the sound of the words
   We've both fallen under
   Whatever we deny or embrace
   For worse or for better
   We Belong, We Belong
   We Belong together


Cut to over-the-shoulder shot of Akane in the darkened garden 
looking in on the family as they eat a late dinner.  Ranma seems 
to have recovered from their argument and is fighting with his father 
over morsels.  As the camera zooms into the open doorway, only 
Kasumi looks concerned that Akane isn't present, and after a 
glance upwards, leaves the table.  Camera pans from the doorway 
to Akane's face, which is still tear-streaked.
   
               AKANE 
   Maybe it's a sign of weakness
   When I don't know what to say
   Maybe I just wouldn't know
   What to do with my strength anyway

Akane closes her eyes.  Dissolve to rapid flashback montage of 
arguments and fights.

               AKANE 
   Have we become a habit
   Do we distort the facts
   Now there's no looking forward
   Now there's no turning back

Montage ends.  Kuno appears from behind the boulder near the pond 
and approaches Akane from the rear, his arms open as if to hug 
her.
   
               AKANE 
   When you say
   We Belong to the light
   We Belong to the thunder

Akane spreads her arms wide and without knowing it knocks Kuno 
unconscious.

               AKANE 
   We Belong to the sound of the words
   We've both fallen under
   Whatever we deny or embrace
   For worse or for better
   We Belong, We Belong
   We Belong together


Cut to interior darkened Tendo house, late at night.  Medium 
shot:  Akane at the door to the guest room.  Carefully and 
quietly, she pushes it open just a hair.  Inside, a thin wedge of 
moonlight illuminates Ranma, sprawled on his stomach on his 
futon.

Closeup on Akane.  Love and desire war with fear in her eyes as 
she steps fully into the room.
   
               AKANE 
   Close your eyes and try to sleep now
   Close your eyes and try to dream
   Clear your mind and do your best
   To try and wash the palette clean

Ranma rolls onto his back, and seemingingly in his sleep...

               RANMA
   We can't begin to know it
   How much we really care

Closeup on Ranma as his eyes snap open.

Cut to Akane, surprised and fearful.

Cut back to Ranma, as he sits up and holds out his hand to her.

               RANMA
   I hear your voice inside me
   I see your face everywhere

Medium shot as Akane hesitates a moment, then drops to her knees 
and wraps her arms around him.  Ranma's arms are around her in a 
flash.  Camera pans in closeup around the two as they sing, and 
we see tears in the eyes of both.

          RANMA AND AKANE
   Still you say
   We Belong to the light
   We Belong to the thunder
   We Belong to the sound of the words
   We've both fallen under
   Whatever we deny or embrace
   For worse or for better
   We Belong, We Belong
   We Belong together


As the vocals fade away, the camera pulls back to show the two in 
a deep embrace that leads to their first real kiss.  And as they 
kiss, the camera pans up and off them to reveal the despondent 
face of Kuno pressed against the window.

FADE OUT


   "WE BELONG"
   A RANMA 1/2 SONGFIC
   
   by Robert. M. Schroeck   
   
   Staged around the song "We Belong", by Pat Benatar
   From her album "Tropico".
   Written by D. Navarro & R. Lowen Time
   Copyright 1984 by Screen Gems-EMI Music Inc.

   Ranma 1/2 characters trademark and copyright Rumiko Takahashi
   and her licensees and syndicators. 

   All rights revert to their original owners.


   Dedicated to my wife Peggy on the occasion of our 8th wedding
   anniversary, 6/23/98.

   C&C gratefully received.

-- Bob

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