Subject: [FFML] Notes for Innocence Lost
From: Lord Archive
Date: 6/19/1998, 12:29 PM
To: FFML


This probably should've been in the author's notes:

Why did I use such a contrived plot for this story?
(Shampoo drugs ramen with something equivalant to passion spice.)

First off, I don't know how many of stories I read using that plot, and
only the Price of Passion and sort of another fict came close to giving
what happens a serious stance. It got rather annoying so I decided write
more own series using that plot with serious tones. There are two main
gripes I have with this type of story: Shampoo (or the one who drugged the
person) almost never gets punished, and everything returns to normal
after-wards. Neither of which is likely.

So, why did I write it with a contrived plot? Because the plot has rarely
been properly handled, and I wanted to correct that. (Note I started this
series before I read the Price of Passion).

Changes:
Momment 1 Possibilty 1 will be switched with Possibilty 2 when in final
form. This is because that possibilty will set up Shampoo's motives and
why she did something so stupid, and shows Akane falling under the effets
of the drug.

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