Nihao! Money-girl again, with a teaser this time. I need C&C and such. Please
please tell me if I should continue this fic. I kinda like it, but Im not sure
f it should go on or not. Please reply privately, so as not to make more spam
on the ML. Spam is bad. Death to spam..unless its the good kind. Its a bit
long for a teaser, but go with me here..
insert legal junk here<<< I dont own these people, so dont sue me. I guess
I own Kimiko, but you can use her if youre dumb enough to want to, just ask
and give me my credit.
Kimiko
*A young girl steps into the Nekohanten. She wipes the sweat off her forehead
and looks around.*
Shampoo: Nihao! You come eat Shampoo special ramen, yes? You sit, Shampoo
bring you bowl right away!
* The pretty Amazon girl bounces away before the younger girl can respond, her
long purple hair flowing behind her. The girl finds a table and sits down. She
is tired, very tired. She is very pretty, with her long black hair and
matching eyes. She stands about 5'6, and has the cutest smile any boy had ever
seen. It was those kawaii little fangs she had, she knew that was what drove
the boys crazy. She giggles to herself. Yes, with her beautiful figure and
long beautiful hair she could have any man she wanted. But for the time, she
had her heart set on looking for one particular boy..*
Shampoo: Here is ramen! You enjoy!
*Shampoo sets a hot, steaming bowl of ramen in front of the girl. *
Girl: Domo arigato, uhh..Shampoo.
*she picks up her chopsticks and takes a few bites. *
Shampoo: Ramen is good, yes?
*The girl nods. She eats quickly, inhaling more than eating. When she is done,
she pays the bill and heads for the door. Suddenly, the floor moves from under
her feet, and she finds her face imbedded into the floor.*
Girl: Hey!
*She quickly picks herself up and looked around, hoping no one has seen her
trip.*
Thing-she-tripped-over: Shampoo! Please forgive me!
*a strange boy with long black hair throws his arms around her in a loving
hug.*
Girl: Hey, who you callin' Shampoo? You got the wrong girl.
*The boy pulls his glasses down over his eyes and looks at her.*
Boy: Oh, I suppose you aren't Shampoo. I'm very sorry..I'm Mousse.
Girl: Kimiko. Kimiko Hibiki.
Mousse: Hibiki, huh? You wouldn't happen to be related to Ryouga Hibiki, would
you?
Kimiko: You know Ryouga?!
Mousse: Yeah, sure. Me and him get together and try to keep Ranma away from
Shampoo and Akane sometimes..how do you know him?
Kimiko: He's my brother. I've been looking for him for a long time. But uh..I
have a really bad since of direction. It kinda runs in our family..
* Kimiko blushes. She didn�t like admitting her directional problem. *
Mousse: Wow, I didn�t know Ryouga had a sister. *starts sweeping the floor
like he had been doing before Kimiko had tripped over him.*
Kimiko: Actually, he doesn�t either. I'm two years younger, and he was lost
again at the time I was born..so he doesn�t know about me. But the time he
found home, I was gone I guess. So my own brother doesn�t know that I exist.
Mousse: I think I can get a little time off. I'm pretty sure Ryouga was seen
at the Tendo place a few days ago. He might still be there. *finishes sweeping
and leaned against the broom, looking at Kimiko.*
Kimiko: You'd really do that for me? You'd help me find Ryouga? *hugs Mousse
tightly, nearly cutting off his breathing.* Oh thank you, thank you, thank
you!!
Mousse: Uhh..Ki-mi-ko? Air? *he was starting to turn purple and blue. *
Kimiko: Oh..hehe..sorry! *she loosens her grip a bit, but still doesn't let
him out of the hug. *
Shampoo's voice: Mousse! Why you hug strange girl? You supposed to be sweeping
floor!
Mousse: Sorry Shampoo..this is Ryouga Hibiki's sister. I'm helping her to find
him. I'll be back soon. Uh..if its ok with you, that is....
Shampoos voice: Hmmm...strange girl come back for more ramen if find brother
and stay in Japan??
Kimiko: *nods* If its always as good as it was today, I'll be back,
definitely.
Shampoos voice: Ok then, Mousse can go, but come back in one hour!
Mousse: Yes, Shampoo. Thank you. Come on, Kimiko, if we only have an hour,
we'd better hurry. *dislodges himself from Kimiko's grip and takes her arm*
knock knock knock<<
Akane: *opens the door* Hello, Mousse. Who�s your friend?
Mousse: Nabiki, this is..
Akane: *pulls his glasses back down over his eyes* Mousse, I'm Akane.
Mousse: Oh! Right, sorry.
Kimiko: Kimiko, Kimiko Hibiki. *bows slightly*
Akane: Hibiki? Then are you...
Kimiko: Ryouga's sister. Have you seen him?
Ranma: *comes up from behind Akane and drops a cute little black pig in her
arms* I found Bacon-breath running around here. Figured you might want him
before I kill him.
Akane: Ranma, don't you dare touch poor P-chan!! He's just an innocent little
pig! *turns her attention to the piglet in her arms* Isn't that right, baby?
Don't worry, Mommy wont let mean old Ranma hurt you.
Mousse: *clears his throat* Can we please get back to the reason we were here
in the first place?
Akane: Oh, um..sure. Please, come in. *steps back from the door*
Mousse: I cant stay, I have to get back to the Nekohanten.
Ranma: Ok, good enough, Mousse, leave, new chick, come inside, and Mr. P...if
you value your life, you better leave too.
*Mousse and P-chan both glare at him. Kimiko takes P-chan from Akane's arms
and studies his bandanna intently. Mousse waves to Akane and Kimiko and heads
back to the Nekohanten.*
Akane: *leads Kimiko and Ranma back inside and sits on the couch* Kimiko, this
is Ranma Saotome, my fiance. *Akane and Ranma both blush* Ranma, this is
Kimiko Hibiki. She's Ryouga's sister.
Ranma: Ryouga's what?!
Kimiko: His sister. He doesn�t know about me either. *she looks down at P-chan
in her lap, who appears to be asleep* Umm..Akane, is your pig ok?
Akane: *takes P-chan and looks at him* Hmm..he seems to have fainted again. *
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Ok, now that youve gotten this far, please tell me what you think, and if I
should continue or not. If I dont get enough replies, I wont continue.
~Nabiki Saotome~