Fire them.


You were swapping in and out of present and past tense.  It was so painful
to read that I gave up.



On Tue, 16 Jun 1998, John Aten wrote:

I forgot to mention all Those that Preread for me in the preamble.
Please forgive me. 

Here all I give thanks too

Dave Eddy
Kaintkr@aol.com
Lathrop Preston
Lord Darkwolf
Nick Leifker
H-Packrat
turbo@relex.com
Rnmalvsakn@aol.com
Emry
Ryan Erik
Thomas Scroggs
Lord Talon
Pat Olsen
And Others who wish not to be named

I must thank these people for their patience and helpful comments as my
fic would not have been as good as I feel it has become thanks to their
help.

John Aten