DreAshaman is sitting alone in a theater.
DreAshaman: Hmm, better do a practice MST before taking on differing powers.
Hmm "The Forsaken : Prologue" sounds good. Lets see it's not very long. I
should only need one other MSTer for this. (He weaves spirit to make a
portal, a few seconds later Ukyo steps through.)
Ukyo (looking around): Hey this doesn't look like the gateway of wishes, what
happened?
DreAshaman (in an omnipresent voice): I have brought you here to help me
accomplish a great task.
Ukyo (big sweatdrops): .....
DreAshaman (in a more normal voice): Sorry, that happens when I use Saidin.
Anyway I've brought you here to help me MST a fic.
Ukyo: Okay, fine. Lets get this over with so I can get back to that cave and
wish for my Ranchan.
In a message dated 6/12/98 2:46:56 PM, you wrote:
<<First fanfic alert!
DreAshaman: First fanfic, first MST, makes sense.
Ukyo: You better not be too cynical. (Taps spatula)
DreAshaman: *gulp*
Special thanks to Long Ngo for helping me write this.
This story draws idea from all 38 volumes of the Ranma mangas and Robert
Jordan's Wheel of Time series... and other fanfics and anime that catch
my attention...
If characters appear to be OOC... they are suppose to so they can fit in
the story better and writers demented imagination... ^_^
Ukyo: My Ranchan better not be out of character! (Threateningly waves battle
spatula at author) Or else.
DreAshaman: You enjoy that thing way too much.
Ukyo: What was that?
DreAshaman: Nothing...
<insert your standard disclaimer(s) here>
Started: June 11, 1998
Finished: June 11, 1998
Revised: June 12, 1998
The Forsaken: Prologue
"Ranma-sama!! HoHoHoHoHoHoHoHoHo!!"
Ukyo: That's obviously Kodachi.
"Ranma, Prepare to DIE!!"
Ukyo: That one's Ryoga.
"Ranma take Shampoo on date!!"
Ukyo: Get away from my Ranchan you amazon hussy!
"Ranchan!!"
Ukyo: Hmm don't recognize that voice.
DreAshaman: Ah... that's you.
Ukyo: What!? My voice doesn't sound anything like that!
DreAshaman (not wanting to argue): Shh, I'm don't want to miss the rest of
the fic!
"Vile cur Saotome, come back here so I may free the fair Tendo Akane and
the 'pig-tail goddess' from your evil clutches"
"Charlotte!! Charlotte!! Come back, my darling Charlotte!!"
"What a haul! What a haul!"
"Give us back out underwear, you old letch!"
"Why does this always happen to me?" Ranma asked himself as he tried to
escape the angry mob. Looking behind him, he could see that they were
gaining but unfortunately, he failed to see the open manhole in front of
him as he did so.
DreAshaman (imitating author): And Ranma fell into the big gapping plot hole!
Ukyo (smakes DreAshaman upside the head with her giant spatula): What have I
told you about being over cynical.
DreAshaman (rubbing head in considerable amounts of pain): ...
--
After a couple of grueling hours of battling 'bugs', a cute goddess
wielding a croquet mallet, Skuld, goes and finds out what the heck could
have cause all these 'bugs'. Flipping on a terminal screen, Skuld's eyes
get wide at what she sees. Screaming angrily, "Waaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!! Who
was the BAKA that replaced the my perfect OS with Windows 95?! When I
found out who did this, I'll KILL the baka!!!"
DreAshaman: Delete "the" from before my.
A few secounds later a new set of 'bugs' appeared and started reeking
havoc on the yaggrids. Skuld then proceeds to smash 'bugs' left and
right venting all her anger and frustration out on them. Suddenly the
yaggrids crashes, due to software problems, but not before a 'bug' was
able to activate and dump a file to the dimensional transport.
--
Suddenly the ground disappeared below Ranma. As Ranma was fell into the
man hole, he cursed to himself for being so careless. Closing his eyes,
he wait for the for the inevitable to happen. If he had left his eyes
open, he would have saw that the air started to shimmer in front of him.
The shimmer disappeared as soon as he hit it, transporting him to a
different world.
When impacting the ground no splash could be heard. Ranma opened his eye
and noticing that he wasn't in a sewer, but in forest where light could
barely. "Huh?" Ranma muttered, while pondered where was the heck was.
Ukyo: I wouldn't either with that description!
DreAshaman: Rewrite these few sentences so they're easier to understand.
"Where am I?! Oh well, at least i'm not being chased by that angry mob
Ukyo: I'm
DreAshaman: You're what?
Ukyo: Nevermind.
anymore!" Ranma then picked himself and search for something or someone
DreAshaman: Began to search would work better here.
that could tell him where he was.
After a couple of minutes of wondering, Ranma came upon a creature that
was half beast and half man (female actually). The creature turned to
see the prey that just came to her. She saw that her 'prey' was a young
man and sensed that he possess strange and special powers. Coming to one
DreAshaman: possessed
conclusion, she kneeling before him. "I await thee order's, Master."
Ukyo: kneeled, and if she better not try anything with my Ranchan. (Taps
spatula)
DreAshaman: I think that's a trolloc and if I'm right she's probably not
Ranma's type. Although most trollocs I've encountered couldn't speak that
well.
Ranma just stared at the creature dumbfoundedly.
DreAshaman: ", dumbfounded." is fine.
DreAshaman: Well not bad for a first fanfic.
Ukyo: And it's a good place to end a prologue.
DreAshaman: And now to start working on my MST for Differing Powers.
Ukyo: After you send me back to it.