Jonathan C Tsoi wrote:
First fanfic alert!
A few secounds later a new set of 'bugs' appeared and started reeking
havoc on the yaggrids. Skuld then proceeds to smash 'bugs' left and
maybe wrecking is a better word than reeking... because havoc doesn't
exactly have a smell.
I think it's spelled Yggdrasil.
Suddenly the ground disappeared below Ranma. As Ranma was fell into the
Ranma was <falling> into the
man hole, he cursed to himself for being so careless. Closing his eyes,
he wait for the for the inevitable to happen. If he had left his eyes
he <waited> for the <snip the extra for the>
and noticing that he wasn't in a sewer, but in forest where light could
barely. "Huh?" Ranma muttered, while pondered where was the heck was.
could barely what? penetrate?
while <he> pondered where <snip the extra was> the heck <he> was.
"Where am I?! Oh well, at least i'm not being chased by that angry mob
capitalize the I'm
anymore!" Ranma then picked himself and search for something or someone
and <searched> for something
that could tell him where he was.
After a couple of minutes of wondering, Ranma came upon a creature that
was half beast and half man (female actually). The creature turned to
see the prey that just came to her. She saw that her 'prey' was a young
man and sensed that he possess strange and special powers. Coming to one
conclusion, she kneeling before him. "I await thee order's, Master."
Ranma just stared at the creature dumbfoundedly.